Percy was practising his sword skills with his younger brother Sunieth (a centaur). He lived in a forest in New Zealand, with Sunieth and his mother Sahara. Unfortunately, he had been told in his childhood years that his father was killed when Percy was born. Since he was told that his father had died, he had always been determined to find the sword that killed him.
Early one morning, an echoing bang came from the door and a letter fell through the letter box. Percy dropped his sword and ripped open the letter... It was from his mum saying that she was going away for the week. Percy, without giving it a second thought figured now was his chance to get away and find the sword.
Just as Percy was finalising his plan in his mind, and was gathering his equipment, he walked through the door only to find that Sunieth was clothed head to toe in battle armour.
"You ready Percy?" Asked Sunieth "Now is your chance to find the sword that killed our father."
"How did you know what was in the letter? Muttered Percy,
"She already told me, now let's go!
Percy stood there with his eyes wide open and speechless.
After what seemed like hours, a carriage mysteriously appeared in front of the house; Sunieth and Percy glared out of the window at the strange sight then stared at each other anxiously, not knowing what was going to happen. Sunieth attached himself to the carriage in readiness to pull the heavy weight and then Percy climbed aboard. Off they went!
Slowly, Sunieth trotted along until they finally found a mysterious cave. Sharply, he stopped the carriage and paused nervously. Percy hopped out of the carriage. They both tiptoed into the cave... Even though it was dark and gloomy, they could just make out shadows in the distance. Walking closer and closer, they came across three doors. Upon each door was scrached the words: Water, Wind and Fire.
The two brothers stopped and thought for a while. They tried to imagine what was on the other side of each door.
Early one morning, an echoing bang came from the door and a letter fell through the letter box. Percy dropped his sword and ripped open the letter... It was from his mum saying that she was going away for the week. Percy, without giving it a second thought figured now was his chance to get away and find the sword.
Just as Percy was finalising his plan in his mind, and was gathering his equipment, he walked through the door only to find that Sunieth was clothed head to toe in battle armour.
"You ready Percy?" Asked Sunieth "Now is your chance to find the sword that killed our father."
"How did you know what was in the letter? Muttered Percy,
"She already told me, now let's go!
Percy stood there with his eyes wide open and speechless.
After what seemed like hours, a carriage mysteriously appeared in front of the house; Sunieth and Percy glared out of the window at the strange sight then stared at each other anxiously, not knowing what was going to happen. Sunieth attached himself to the carriage in readiness to pull the heavy weight and then Percy climbed aboard. Off they went!
Slowly, Sunieth trotted along until they finally found a mysterious cave. Sharply, he stopped the carriage and paused nervously. Percy hopped out of the carriage. They both tiptoed into the cave... Even though it was dark and gloomy, they could just make out shadows in the distance. Walking closer and closer, they came across three doors. Upon each door was scrached the words: Water, Wind and Fire.
The two brothers stopped and thought for a while. They tried to imagine what was on the other side of each door.
Which way did they go?
Water, Wind or Fire?
What an exciting start to your quest - I can't wait to find out what happens. Are you going to add any more chapters? This must have taken a while to type onto the blog! Mrs S
ReplyDeleteComments from the class:
ReplyDelete"I think your story is wonderful!"
"I think the mum is sad because she is all on her own"
"It is exciting because when they went in the cave and found the doors they didn't know which door to choose"