The wind howled in the trees, Jennifer stepped up to the old, gloomy house and shivered. Her hands were ice cold and a tear shedded in her eye as she knocked with her pale hand. There was no answer. She tried again, this time a little bit louder! Suddenly the door opened ajar with a slow creaking sound, Jennifer's heart skipped a beat, as she peeked her head through she noticed cobwebs and spiders scattered everywhere and as she went inside she heard ghostly sounds! Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder. Should I turn around? She was thinking.
Oo that gave me shivers!Well done tasmin you ownly used 100 words, so great well done!
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Don't do it Jennifer! Wow! You have built the tension up brilliantly Tamsin! Thank you so much for joining in the 100 Word Challenge this week. You can see your entry here: http://bit.ly/hz2zgm
ReplyDeleteBrilliant Tasmin!
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