Tuesday 15 March 2011

My 100 word challenge!!!

As Jeff plumeted towards the sea, he glanced at his final landing spot. The crystal water was so clear you could see the bottom of the ocean. Jeff started his day with a bit of sky diving, but unfortunately for him someone had cut his parachute! Jeff started to record a message on his phone: "IF YOU FIND THIS MESSAGE I WILL ALREADY BE DEAD..." he shouted through the wind. His body hit the water with an almighty, SMACK! To his amazment, he was alive! He dialed nine, nine, nine into the drenched phone then called for a speed boat, a few moments later he was on his way back to his house.

1 comment:

  1. Tyler I have added a link to your work on the Head's Office page. Why not go and have a look?

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