Monday 14 February 2011

Recount about make believe car crash.


On Friday the 21st January I (James Harris) was walking home from school,later than usual as I had been attending a club. It was around 4:30pm, the roads were icy and it was beginning to get dark. As I arrived at Nut Hill I was the only witness to the accident.

This was the opening paragraph to the recount.
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2 comments:

  1. Heron school14 February 2011 at 12:07

    A good start. Well done - now what can we do about this photograph? Mrs S.

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  2. Heron school15 February 2011 at 11:31

    That is an amazing opening paragraph! EXCELLENT!!!

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