Monday 14 February 2011

the door by Sam Evans

Ali stood silentley,looking at the door.With a slow creaking sound,it opened.Taking a deep breath, Ali walked inside...A smell of rotting wood filled the air, he looked around and saw the wood that started the stench and all of this old stuff. Never had he been so scared in his life. He knew it was a mistake going to the mansion. He aggresivley threw himself at the door but broke his shoulder. Suddenley he saw a strange figure shivering in the corner of the dusty old room. It was an alien!

1 comment:

  1. Arghhh! I am terrified. You have built up the tension so well. Excellent start . Mrs S

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