Monday 14 February 2011

My Story, The Safe Box!

The Safe Box.
        Silently, Andrew put his ear to the living room door. "What is it?" asked Chloe, as she was shivering with scaredness. Andrew opened the door but ... there was nobody in there. They both looked around the room and they saw their mums special  box's lid open. " Grandma gave mum that box," Chloe screeched. As they got closer to the box , the voice got louder. "Why don't we take this to Grandma's house?" whispered Andrew, as he tip - toed to the box and closed the lid.
        Grandma lived on the other side of town. One hour later, they were sitting in Grandma's living room eating chocolate biscuits and drinking a cup of squash. Grandma tried to get comfy in her very comfortable chair. She puts on her almost broken glasses and looked inside the special box. She could hear the wonderful voice of her sister.
         Grandma started happily crying. " Well, who is it? " asked Andrew and Chloe. There was a long pause, as Grandma wiped her tears away. She couldn't concentrate at all.
          " It's my sister!" Grandma whispered. Chloe and Andrew couldn't believe it. " So why  is she in there?" Andrew said , like he was worrying.
"She died two years ago and she said when she dies she'll come back to the family." Suddenly, Grandma's sisters face appeared! Grandma gently stroked her face.
            Four weeks later, Grandma past away. Chloe and Andrew weren't very sad because they knew that she was safe with her sister. That was 19 years ago and they still open the box and talk to her!
                       
                                                                                                By Holly Jones.


2 comments:

  1. Aw - this is lovely. What a fantastic ending too. It is much easier to read with the different colours - what a good idea!
    Well done - a lovely story - Mrs S.

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  2. Thankyou Mrs Smith.- Holly

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