The wind howled in the trees,Johnny stepped towards the big black, steel door.Suddenly, the door started to rattle; Johnny's heart started to pump and pound.'What is behind that door?'Johnny wondered.He pressed his stone cold hands against the door. Johnny placed his hand on the door handle.'Arrrgggghhhhh! That's burning hot! My hand is going to blister!' He screamed and stomped in anger.Johnny took a step backwards.He looked at the door; he thought, 'What could of caused that door to be burning hot?' Johnny walked back home thinking, thinking about the door.He shivered slightly.
I'm not surprised he was shivering! Excellent tension buit there Shannon! Thank you so much for joining the 100 Word Challenge this week. You can see your entry here http://bit.ly/hz2zgm
ReplyDeleteHi Shannon your piece of writing is very imaginative and you use lots of fantastic vocabulary!
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