Quietly,Sam steped out of the house to go to his friends house without his mum knowing,he ran to a tree and checked if his mum was looking(thankfully she wasn't). Just as Sam went to move on he was drawn to an old house, suddenly a shiver ran up his spine and the wind howled in the trees, at this moment Sam knew there was something spooky about the house so he moved to have a closer look. As he came to the house he looked at the number and it appeared to be 84, then he realised this house was haunted!!
Very clever use of the phrase you were given. I was getting quite nervous at the beginning of your story. I was worried about what was going to happen to Sam. Mrs S
ReplyDeleteKym, your story is now on the Head Teacher's blog! Well done. Mrs S
ReplyDeleteKym, I love it! It has such a great spooky atomsphere! Emily P xxx
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