The start of a mystery story

Ali stood silently,looking at the door. With a slow creaking sound,it opened .Taking a deep breath,Ali walked inside ... Peering left and right , front and back Ali took another trembling step closer , then  another and another . BANG ! The door slamed shut. Disaster struck !Ali tried to reach the door but couldn't,he tried to walk through the frozen stiffness of his bones but still failed.                                                                              By Thomas .Munoz , I hope you like it.