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The haunted house.

    Ali stood silently, looking at the door.With a slow creaking sound,it opened.Taking a deep breath, Ali walked inside. The room was dark and gloomy, it smelt damp and dusty . In the room there was old furniture covered in white sheets and cobwebs, Ali steped further in to get a closer look. 'The door 'slammed 'behind her', at this moment Ali knew there was something spooky about this place, and quickly she ran to the door and tryed to open it, it was no good the door was looked! She herd a noise on the stairs an went to investigate.

   Just as she came to the stairs there was a gloomy shadow skuttling along the walls, Ali jumped out of her skin and looked at the around. She slowly got to the stairs and the shadow appired yet again but Ali tryed to stay calm but how could she? It was the scaryest thing she'd ever experianced! Ali put on a brave face and went up the stairs, just as she went to take another step a rat scurryed along her feet, frantically she ran up the stairs screaming! A shiver ran down her spine and it began to feel colder and colder. Sudenly the door handle began to twist and two gloomy eyes appired behind the door, Ali became hipnotised and steped closer and the dooropened wider, she steped into the room and the door shut behind her ...

By Kym Tansley.