Monday, 21 May 2012

MY BLITZE POEM

  

Flames crying burning down, burning intheir way.

The flames are like fire works burning within energy.

Enormons bombs bowing up the ground, childrencrying for their parents.

Big building surrounded by fire, hopingtobe safe.

Frightnig flames fiercly eat the houses.

Thats why no one felt safe beacause of the dangorus blitze. 




1 comment:

  1. Flames fiercely eating houses - that is such a descriptive metaphor. I love it.

    Mrs S

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