Here is a paragraph from my story, I hope you like it!
Once upon a time, there was a little ghost named Boo;who lived in a spooky graveyard
Late one night Boo went to Frescos (the local supermarket) because big bad mouse had chicken pox
In his Frescos bag he had two ruby cherries, one cola bottle and one dummy.
Once upon a time, there was a little ghost named Boo;who lived in a spooky graveyard
Late one night Boo went to Frescos (the local supermarket) because big bad mouse had chicken pox
In his Frescos bag he had two ruby cherries, one cola bottle and one dummy.
Hi Megan
ReplyDeleteCan you see anywhere where there should have been capital letters? If you correct them you can have a House point!
Mrs S